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Feeling Free
by BlueEyedMe
Sweet Dewshine enjoying the feeling of the woods
Draw with tablet and colored with SAI. One of my first try using tablet.
Please tell me what you think. Critique is welcome, as I would like to get better. ^^
Posted October 02, 2011, 09:35:47 AM
Dewshine Feeling Free
Draw with tablet and colored with SAI. One of my first try using tablet.
Please tell me what you think. Critique is welcome, as I would like to get better. ^^
Posted October 02, 2011, 09:35:47 AM
Dewshine Feeling Free
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Mirror
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Comment #1 - Posted October 02, 2011, 11:53:41 AM
If this is your first time using a tablet - I'm impressed!
I really like the atmosphere of this picture. Makes me miss summer. *sigh* You've captured Dewshines carefree and happy personality. And kudos for the difficult pose that you've pulled of very well! As for the C/C (since you requested it): You'd might want to add a little more contrast. The light colors suit the motif well, but I think the details would stand out more if you add some shadows and more visible lines. Oh, and WELCOME to EQfanart! *does the new artist-dance* |
Treefox
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Comment #2 - Posted October 02, 2011, 11:57:43 AM
Absolutely agreed! Great use of tablet and the perspective of arm and leg are difficult and you pulled it off with great skill. It's always nice to see a happy Dewshine!
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Czarine
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Comment #3 - Posted October 02, 2011, 01:30:55 PM
Wow, so much better than my first tablet scribbles! I agree pretty much with what has been said, but I'd like to see some white clouds or something in the sky. Now it feels a bit empty, as it's such a large part of your artwork. But otherwise you've done well, it sure has a summer-like feel to it!
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BlueEyedMe
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Comment #4 - Posted October 04, 2011, 04:34:25 AM
~ Mirror,
It's nice to know I captured Dewshines personality in the drawing, a she enjoys the summer The pose was hard for me to do, so I'm glad you think I could pull it off. Shadows and more visible lines - got it Thanks for your constructive critique Thanks for the welcome! Haha, and the new artist-dance. (I gotta remember how to do that dance) ~ Treefox, Thanks for the nice words - and yes, a happy Dewshine is always good ~ Czarine, Thank you! I'm glad you think so Thanks for your thoughts considering the BG: It is a large part of my work, so I'll keep in mind to remember clouds or other details, whenever I do works with the sky:D |
Afke
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Comment #5 - Posted October 05, 2011, 03:14:00 AM
Clouds, or mountains, or more forest... depends on what angle you're chosing. Now it looks like we're slightly looking up to Dewshine, so clouds would be a good idea. But I don't feel the pose only suggests that, it could still be mountains or forest as well at eye-level.
I agree, I like the whole mood of the picture, but am missing contrast. Lines aren't necessarily the big thing missing here, looks like you're more of a painter. But shading can already add a lot. When you blur your eyes a little (or look through your lashes as some would say), you can see perfectly what stands out in your picture and what not. For example; the only thing I can see in the face are the eyes, and the haircolor almost becomes the same as her skincolor. I hope this helps a bit! Good to see more new people here, I hope you'll add more. |
BlueEyedMe
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Comment #6 - Posted October 05, 2011, 06:20:39 AM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts - it was very constructive. I'll be keeping it in mind for next time I'll draw and color.
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